well the only thing thats bothering me is that she isn't really shaded in lol i cant really explain it but seeing how the sun is like above her, the inside of her would be like darker, if that makes sense |D i am really terrible at explaining things ;; but great job with the pose and shading c':
She actually is. The tones you see are much darker than the original swatches chosen. Since the light source is behind her, it calls for a reverse-pillow shade effect. I tried to illustrate this by lightening the shoulder area. Basically, the shading is subtle, at best. I wasn't quite sure how to show the light source's influence. I did another version with light pouring over her figure, almost like how you see something in the headlights of a car pointed towards you, but it was too harsh for the time of day and the strength of the light.
Nah, it's just that sometimes I don't know how to do something, so I try something out and it's not always super noticeable. I usually try to keep it subtle.
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